Statement of Fact: I state my thesis that athletes have those three assets including their athleticism to make them great.
Reasoning: I give examples of players today who posses the qualities I talked about and give other evidence to why my claim is right. I give my own opinion as well.
Conclusion: I wrap up my argument and state my paper in simpler terms.
Here is a clip of Peyton Manning who is a prime example of what I'm talking about. He's also a great actor.
Your paper sounds exciting! It's a really good topic. Can you believe Peyton is with the Broncos now?!
ReplyDeleteI think this is going to be a really good paper! I like the simplicity of your organization, it makes your point really clear.
ReplyDeleteI like your topic! This looks like it'll be a great paper!
ReplyDeleteWay cool topic! And being from Colorado, Peyton Manning and the whole trade deal with Tebow is all up on my Facebook and Twitter lately ha. I still don't know how I feel about the whole thing.
ReplyDeleteI know this is late, but I need my five comments. I don't know a whole lot about professional sports, but I know Peyton Manning and I've always liked him. And random thought: you kind of look like him
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