'Violence and the Inner City Code" is an ineffective argument to convince readers of the dangers of bad neighborhoods because it doesn't provide enough evidence or detail concerning "The Code" and it lacks alternative rhetoric such as videos or pictures which diminishes their argument.
Friday, February 10, 2012
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This topic is very interesting, the only real violence where I come from is in the inner city- dogs stuck in a cage don’t get along, and neither do people. Likewise, it seems that those in the city are the ones who press gun-control because they don’t understand the importance and correct way to use them.
ReplyDeleteI'm really interested to see how this one turns out. I think it's a good topic that maybe doesn't get the right kind of attention all the time.
ReplyDeleteI like how you are going about this in the opposite way than a normal rhetorical analysis which points out devices the author does use effectively. I'm interested to see how it turns out!
ReplyDeleteI also thinkg this will be a really interesting paper! I can't wait to read it!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad that you picked to show how it is ineffective. I think it's great how you added that pictures really do change how a blog is viewed.
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